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I still remember when you came to me crying breezy! *-* this is writen so well good luck ;)Delete
~lighty of de heart *-* magicalness
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Hello Grayfur! Pebblestream here, ready to give my story for Leaffall! Here it is!ReplyDelete
Leaffall was born with her exiled parents, Mossheart and Snakesong, Snakesong died protecting Mossheart, who was protecting Leafkit, in a fox attack.
The fox soon went after Mossheart, who had time to hide Leafkit in a tree and died fighting the fox. Leafkit was soon found by another loner, Ditch, who took care of her and was her best friend until he grew old and died while crossing the thunderpath with her. She had learned to hunt and how to care for herself, but grew up alone and without family. She discovered the Dark Forest in a dream and joined as a place to call home and cats that would care for her. She grew cold but learned to trick other cats by acting kind and sweet. Her eyes are white but she can see perfectly. She is a calico with no siblings and she now lives as a loner, going where she pleases.
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Fasthawk/Fastclaw's story. Wingshadow, A black and grey tabby she cat with light blue eyes and Fireblaze, A tom with lime green eyes and a fiery pelt were in a clan called Leafclan, A small yet lovely and loyal clan. They soon became mates after finding out their feelings for each other and had 2 beautiful kits that they had decided to names to be Coalkit and Aquakit. Aquakit was a dark orange tabby she cat with green eyes like her father's. Coalkit resembled his mother and the only thing different was his pattern. He had large leopard like spots that were black in the middle of a light grey ring. One day, Fireblaze took Coalkit into the forest for supposedly a "walk" when suddenly he started attacking the defenceless kit. A loner soon ran over and kicked Fireblaze away, only to result in it's death. Coalkit eventually was able to slip away from his father and run deep into the forest and out of Leafclan territory. He was later raised by the same band of loners that took in the one Fireblaze killed, And Coalkit quickly earned his name: Coal. Once he was old enough to leave them, he flicked his tail good-bye and headed off. Before he could go any farther then a fox length, A slim all black she stepped out and offered to go with him. Her name was Death and she had large yellow eyes. Coal only had one thing on his mind that he hadn't told the others. This could affect weather she would go with him or not. He had wanted to kill his father to make him pay for what he had done. So he called Death over and told her his small story. She nodded quickly as if she was his sister wanting to skill anything in sight. They set out on their long journey back into the territory of Leafclan. Coal peered in to see Fireblaze sulking around camp. He immediately sprang out and his jaws snapped around his father neck,killing him in a matter of seconds. Coal wanted to go even farther though. He wanted to make an anti-clan to destroy all of Leafclan. He slipped out of camp with Death by his side. He went back to the loners and asked them to join his clan, which they all did. So far he had Red, Blue, Crooked, Tiko, Shamera, Claw, Scar, Breeze, Death, Snow, Disease, and Poison on his side. It was small, yet efficient. They headed back and ran right into the camp, Destroying each and every herb, Stealing each kit they could find, And taking each one of the leaders lives. Coal saw Wingshadow, And with a small flick of his claw, killed her. The anti-clan was unstoppable. Finally after all the blood had been spilled they padded away. Eventually they made a camp of thorns and Coal made up the name of their group, Cats Of The Dark. He chose Death to be his mate and they had three kits. Dark, Fire, And Fang. Those kits were abused just as Coal had been. They decided to run away also, To get away from the pain. They were somehow separated as they pelted out. Fang wanted to find a better clan, A clan that didn't want to kill for a living. He found Meadowclan, But they left him because they didn't want anymore kits in the nursery at that time. He that saw a medicine cat apprentice in the forest, picking out dry and useless herbs off a plant. Fang padded up and asked what clan he was in, And he gladly said, "I am In Fireclan.". Fang asked if he could join, Which he replied "Ask Flamestar." So The tom took him into Fireclan camp. The medicine cat stated when they were there that he was Moonshimmer, apprentice of Greyfur. And next is a totally different story. That's just a little bit of Fast's story, And By the way Fang = Fast.ReplyDelete
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Thts really good fast! If I use it I might have to make coal the main character,idk. But it'd be good to use fast since I mentioned him a few times but not in detail.Delete
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Flamestar's Comment (I deleted the old contest page)ReplyDelete
The plot of is there is a murderer lurking in the shadows of Fireclan, each moon more and more cats are being killed in Fireclan and in different clans. A family member in Flamestar's Family tree is the main character his name is Stormkit-Stormflame. At 4 moons his parents, Oakheart and Featherbreeze are the first to be killed. Ever since then he has been trying to find the murderer. This plot is a mystery with constant twists and turns to it there needs to loads of mystery in it btw.
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story of featherbreeze.. o3oDelete
Featherkit was walking around her mothers camp playing a hunting gmae with her 2 sisters echokit and stormkit.She finds them easily in a few heartbeats.Then out of no where a df cat named tigerstar comes into camp and growls at lightningstar." its time u give me ur choice luightningstar, which kit will iget for my payment?" at this featherkit pushes her sisters into the nursery and offers herself to go.He snatches her up before lightnigstar can say anything.On the journy tigerstar accidently drops featherkit on a rock and she looses her memory.There was a she-cat with him named Dovewing.She only pretened to be with tigerstar to protect featherkit.When featherkit was almost 6 moons tigerstar forced her to start training.When featherkit finally figured out what happende she run away and went beck to her mom.She races back to the camp to find only her 2 sisters.They say thet lightningstar has left to join a new clan and her new name was lightningheart.So featherkit and her sisters follow their mother scent trail to the clans camp.She finds the leader of the clan and her and her sisters ask to join when there mother is out hunting.The leaders name was flamestar.He agreed to let them join if they took a trial.Featherkit and her sisters passed with flying colors and flamestar amde them apprentice featherpaws mentor was scarstorm.Few moons later featherpaw was made a warrior then she founds a mate named frostfire.They had to kits forestdew and cloudshine.Soon they had problems and separated.Then featherbreeze found oakheart, the fireclan deputy.He was always nice to her and soon they were mates.They are still thinking about there future and they will have troubles ahead, but featherbreeze nows the oakheart is the right on for her. ( u can add action to it ik it isnt that exciting and very long o3o)
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This is Oakheart with Wolfstrike's story, might be a bit long though...ReplyDelete
Wolfpaw was about to be made warrior, and he could tell Petalstream, his mentor, was proud. The yowls of Wolfstrike resounded through the clearing. A few moons later he got his first apprentice, and there was even talk of him being deputy, because Emberfire was soon to be an elder. His apprentice Snakepaw was an excitable little thing, and was very energetic. One day he was asked to go on a patrol with a few other cats, including the newly made apprentice, Sootpaw who was Petalstream's kit. They were attacked by foxs and Sootpaw was killed chasing them off. Petalstream wasn't the same since that, though no other cat seemed to notice. A few weeks Wolfstrike saw Snakepaw slip from the apprentice den and look around as if making sure no one was there. Wolfstrike smiled as he slipped out of camp and though, "He must want to hunt." He did, and he most have known Wolfstrike was following him, for he tried extra hard. Wolfstrike was distracted by a petal falling from a dead flower and crumpling in the stream. Suddenly he heard a yowl from Snakepaw. He looked over and cat was towering over him in the shadows. Before Wolf could do anything the cat had slammed Snakpaw down and into a tree, and Snakepaw rolled down laying still. As Wolfstrike dashed over and nudged him he heard a low chuckle. The mysterious cat stepped from the moonlight, it was Petalstream. "How does it feel," She hissed, "To have someone close to you killed during hunting." Wolfstrike could only stare. Suddenly Petalstream plunged herself into the cold water of the river and started to drown. With a shout WS dashed over and dragged her limp form from the water, but intead of being grateful she yowled for help. Soon the whole clan was there, and no matter what WS said they were convinced he had killed Snakepaw and Petalstream. They then chased him away and he barely managed to escape, and is now a loner. He also hates clan cats and whenever he sees on he makes sure to give it a few scars. Again sorry for the length... As you can see a started wrapping it up rather quick towards the end there .-. -
Raven your plots awesome I really like it i will have it in the next story for sure!!!!!!ReplyDelete
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Sour was born in LakeClan. His parents were Fireblaze and Winterberry. Winterberry was a medicine cat during the time she was pregnant. Sour had a sister named Flower. Winterberry took them far away from the clan to her mother who was a kittypet. Sour grew up not knowing who his family was. Flower had gone missing and was pronounced dead. His two leg sold him to another two leg and now he was alone.He learned about clans and met some cats related to him. One day he had enough of the clan cats and how they acted and he sweared vengeance on them. Moons passed until he caught the forest on fire. Sour was a stressed cat. He had loved a cat that never loved him which made him mad. He had spent time with Bailey and she showed him he was not all bad. One day a clan was being chased by dogs but he lead the dogs away. He died at the thunder path by doing this.ReplyDelete
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Grasswhisker2's Post (I had to do it for him :) )ReplyDelete
Froststar takes out the patrol. They go near the stream that Frost and Rose found when they were little. He sees the bones Rage wanted. He quietly sneaks up and grabs them and hides them to get later. When the patrol comes back to camp, Cloudpaw and Berrypaw are near play fighting near the apprentice den. When its night, Froststar sneaks out of camp and grabs the Bones from where he put them earlier. Then, he scents something. One of his warriors named Breezefall and a cat from another clan are together. Froststar claws the apprentice looking cat away. In the monring, The dawn patrol had returned with prey. Then something smell sin the entrance to camp. Badger!
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Hey I have a question :DReplyDelete
Could I make another one just for a backround character that pops up every once in awhile, I know Pebblekit is already in one, and thanks for the 'beautiful' eyes, really gives us something to talk about. -
Wednesday, June 5, 2013
The Contest Entrees
I want to delete the contest page on The Story of FireClan but I want to save the stories everyone posted... so here they are! Everything on it, as a matter of fact XD.
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Breezepelt froze she heard this name before she wasn't she on what to do. The tom spoke,"What are you doing here?" Breezepelt pelted off not answering his question. Later at clan~ Breezepelt sat licking her white paws she flicked her ear as she heard the tom know as Dethscar. She padded to him. He meowed,"I'm in this clan too breezepelt." She meowed back,"Uhhmmm...okay?"
Later that leafbare. They became mates. Dethscar was known for cheating on his mates, later Breezepelt found out he was cheating and befriened the girl that dethscar was cheating on with Breezepelt, Yourdeth was her user. Yourdeth told breezepelt what Dethscar does, use you and make you feel loved, when your not. Breezepelt was furious and didn't want to belive later that day Dethscar said he ruined her life, Breezepelt ran away crying. ~too be continued! Thanks guys!